On Fire

When your heart desires more

I lie down inside you 
At times, when you are fast asleep
Breathing in the enigma of your burnt soul
which lead me to your scars 

& there
exactly there
I feel that I had reached the horizon of your heart
where I will be able to heal you, now
bringing Love that would again sew you
into stars of my floundering sky!

Author's Note

Honest comments, please!

Reviews

[Laconic Meraki]

I relate to these words.
The desire and need to save and heal My love.
It's almost like a gravitational pull.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou so much for your words Christa :)

Love from India

[Laconic Meraki]

Ditto.
-love from the south

[Ankita Dwivedi]

it is really spectacular how you have reached the horizon of your lover's heart because we never know what the other person feels until we walk the path he/she has walked on ,get hurt as bad as the person did ,and bear the wounds .then we slowly feel it healing with time and scars speak for survival more than pain.loved your work ,pragati.
-Ankita:)

[Pragati Chaudhary]

That's so sweet of you.
Thank-you so much, these words are feeling like heaven. Yes, to understand someone takes a lot and once you do- you are never the same as before!

[Ankita Dwivedi]

needles, friend.
Precisely said ..
love,Ankita

[Priyanshi]

Beautiful weave of words and emotions ....
great desire involved in the writing dear.
:))

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou dear sister :)

[An owl on the moon]

What a beautiful awakening place of the soul, this loving desire to arouse life and cleaning fire within the one you adore. It is an extravagant desire.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thank you soo much owl :)

[Avinash]

Nothing excites more than a broken beautiful soul to a promising writer.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou soo much Avinash!
Your words mean a lot to me!

[Hebe]

Very touching and delicate write... lovely!

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou soo much dear Hebe.
You made my night beautiful!

[Coyote Poetry]

It is beautiful. I liked the kindness given and shared in the poetry. The poem made the reader understand the love and concern for another is. Thank you Pragati for sharing the amazing poetry for love. I liked this one.
Coyote

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou soo much dear Coyote :)
LOvely wors of appreciation from a beautiful writer himself :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Pragati. I enjoyed this one.

[Mavericks]

Liked the depth.Love and relationships are more about the healing and transformation. Good job Doc!

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou soo much dear Sid

[Najam Us Saher]

Passionate words. I loved the words you have chosen to frame lovely sentences.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Ohhhh! Thankyou soo much Najam
Your words always create something beautiful in my mind :)

[Najam Us Saher]

I am happy that my words inspire you. ☺
You're welcome.

[Zoya]

It certainly is deep; relatable at the same time. We come across a number of souls in our lives...lively souls, happy-go-lucky souls, melancholic souls...broken souls. If one ever, by chance, falls in love with a broken one, it, more or less, becomes his responsibility to cast away their sadness...just an unwritten law. And this is not something one does forcefully...they love doing it. Give more love and be loved equally in return. This is how the poem spoke to me at least.
Nicely expressed!

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Yeah actually.
because the one who is broken requires only Love in return. It's pleasant to grant Love & just being in Love that way......You understood is exactly the way I thought - Appreciated Zoe

[Zoya]

Glad I did :)