Desire

Kiss her heart and she would rain,
soaking into desires that would weave you
into tiny small threads

May be then you could give hope to her
because those threads on getting wet with your breath;
would break into unopen ends, setting you free
but
you would choose to stay with her in glee!

Author's Note

Be honest

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Kind, sweet and wonderful and hopeful words for love. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Ohhhh! Thankyou soo much dear for reading and commenting!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Pragati.

[Xochipilli]

This is so beautiful and it makes me feel loved, and it makes me feel so very happy. Well written Pragati, very well written. :)

[Pragati Chaudhary]

thankyou soo much dear

[Priyanshi]

Sweet, sweet lines...loved it.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou soo much dear :)

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure.:)

[MaximumFlight]

Very beautiful; absolutely wonderful :)

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou soooo Much dear :)

[Ghania]

Desiring and enticing! Oh, how much I missed reading your works! Loved it. :P

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Ohhhh dear,
Thankyou soo much for all the Love
M glad you loved it
:) Keep reading & Reviewing :)

[Ghania]

You're welcome.
Ya. Will surely :P Now that I have come back. Phew. :P

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Yeah! :D
:)

[Shubham Sharma]

The poem is very fascinating. And i purchased your book from Amazon. I am telling the truth it is the first poetry book i had purchased. And i really feel that the book's worth is so much more than the current MRP.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Ohhhhhh M soo glad Shubham
You purchased the Ebook?
Thankyou soo much for all the Love

:)

[Avinash]

I noticed..glee is your favorite word and here in this poem it does wonders.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Hahaha Well!
It's not a favorite but yeah I use it generally for May be rhyming Purposes :)
Thankyou soo much dear for liking :)

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Reads like desire, indeed.

For a man that kisses the heart of the woman he desires and stays loyal to her and always by her side will be rewarded tenfold with the same love and desire.
(Small note: change 'broke' to 'break', reads better.)

Your words are soft and gentle and underpin the desire you seek for yourself and are willing to give to the right man.

Very nice, soothing words. Well written.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou Sooo much Doodley

I will :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Deep and thoughtful. It was a bit difficult to understand the imagery you've created with your words and what you wanted to convey, but when I read this again, it was different and I liked it.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Actually yeah deep
It takes a lot from a Man to be genuine enough to love a woman soulfully.
Kiss her heart is used by me to depict the state of being loyal.
and she would rain depicts her love for him.
and her ends or her wishes would fulfill and she would be free to believe that his man loves her and that man - instead of ditching her then could choose to stay with her always

[Najam Us Saher]

Lovely explanation. Sums it up.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou dear

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.