Beautiful#

It’s so beautiful,
when things you love come back to you
Like Pink cotton candies
awaiting a smiling child!

Author's Note

Honest review plz

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words my friend. Wonderful flow of thoughts led to the perfect ending. Thank you Pragati for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Oh! Thankyou soo much dear Coyote.......

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Pragati.

[Priyanshi]

wow, what a comparison....lovely sweet lines.
among your poem, this is my favourite.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou soo much dear Sis :*

[Priyanshi]

:)
My pleasure.

[MaximumFlight]

Very short, but still wonderful. I like it :)

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou soo much dear MF

[jacob erin-cilberto]

short and sweet...many things could be likened to that cotton candy, and what it meant to a child...
we have to let go of something before it has a chance to come back on its own...
the brevity gives us more to imagine.
j.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Yeah........The cotton candy want it's daysback :D
Thankyou J

[Alistair (Ali)]

The Forlorn Hope- nothing tastes as it did , the first time around, and we seek to replicate that flavour- it is the bedrock of faith.
We want to believe.
We convince ourselves , that all things gone were better than the tepid now.
And we could be right.

Well written.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou Soo much Alis :)
Yes at times, we wait and we could be right
Things that come back to us...the longing - Just everything :)

[Najam Us Saher]

How sweet. Loved the simile. This makes me feel happy, I feel like reading this again and again. Thank you for making me feel such ☺

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Ohhhhhhhhh! So glad you like it Najam

[Avinash]

This minimalist poem makes you wonder if the writer is already invited you into her world in a very affectionate manner.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Hahahha :)
A sweet Review Indeed!
Thankyou soo much Avinash
:)

[Xochipilli]

This made me smile and feel like that child, this is really cute and I love it!

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Awwwww Thankyou dear Xochipilli :)

[Xochipilli]

No problem Pragati. :D

[AcasualPawn]

Its really beautiful,
when things you love come back to you..
I miss past me,
And i don't believe future me...... Sigh

Good work writer...

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thanks a lot SSR
:)

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It certainly is! Unless of course it's a boomerang and you fail to catch it!

Happiness can be truly fleeting and to have something that we savoured return to us in some shape or form is a blessing itself. For this time we must cherish it even more and not let it go.

A lovely little write, Pragati.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Yeah! Lovely to hear from you Doodley :)