Laden#

Just a heart!

A lot still remains inside you
even if you ask a person; to leave!

Reviews

[Xochipilli]

If you loved someone or they were close to you, even if they take a piece of you they are stuck in you, even after they have left you.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Yes exactly!
but, they can never understand that :)

Thankyu dear for all the Love
:)

[Avinash]

We love ourselves when we love another. So the memory will remain.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Yes exactly
and it hurts a lot till time engulfs it and levels the Pain!

[Avinash]

Observe the waves. Let them calm down. Don't fight, it will only agravate.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

I never fought....Later when I was ghosted!
Calm and composed!

Karma is a b***h aneway ;)

[Avinash]

A learning then :)

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Yeah :)
A necessity ;)

[Najam Us Saher]

You just captured the deepest thought of heart when you put that feeling into words.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Ohh! Thankyou soo much Najam
I am glad you could connect :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're most welcome.

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true. When we loved and needed someone. Become a part of us forever. Thank you Pragati for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou soo much Coyote :)
I am glad you could connect with that!

[Coyote Poetry]

I did connect and you are welcome my friend.

[Norbanus]

As often is the case with tales we spin
this one reveals a story wracked with grief.
The woman says 'You won't do that again.'
Her vengeance gained, but also some relief?

Now, back at home she drags out an old trunk
Then tosses in his shoes, his games and brac.
His xbox, remote and that other junk
she tosses in the trash collector's rack.

'So, let me see,' she says, and sits to rest,
'I've done the deed without a single hitch.
His broken fist and teeth are for the best.'
She tossed the bat in with him in ditch.

She rushed off to the church, she'd not be late
Like last time, it's the place to find a mate.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Wow
That resembles my Poem

Great joB Norbanus :D

[Saumya]

Very true! Pragati 😊
It is often how a person reacts on leaving something/somebody, and how hard/easy it actually is for them to leave, that defines their attachment and dedication towards them.

Beautiful thought.well done😊

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Nobody thinks before leaving

I guess how easy is for ppl to leave you and move on!read moreNobody thinks before leaving

I guess how easy is for ppl to leave you and move on!
Broken but better to move on!
Thankyou soo much Saumya :)

[Saumya]

You're welcome :)

[Ardra]

hehe sorry but cant help remembering Bin laden :P
when i read your title

we should kick them out of our heart..
clear our heart with some floor cleaner and spray inside to keep all pests away :)

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Hahahha!
Exactly
and if not been cleaned then some more termites would come over :-P