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A Poem by Pragati Chaudhary
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Some things in life cannot be explained but just felt
like water sliding down from the edges of a mountain cliff
Like a bird flying around with a twig in her tiny beak
Like a tree standing tall among the valleys, covered in green
Like music, a sound coming from a distant temple
along the upper side of the mountain stream

Lend that sound to me and I’ll make a delighted hymn
Lend that twig and I’ll make a beautiful home
Lend that hand and I’ll ink that tattoo of your vision
Lend me some earth and I’ll make it green again

Walk around the wide open ground, Laugh out loud
shout and cry that heart out,
Sit along the edge of a road and
just look towards the sky laden with Love

May be then, some feelings would come
woven in golden shades of dust and heaven
May be then your heart would melt again
to classify the bits and pieces of that part

which was lost among the crowds, back in the city
which was laden with faults, that people pointed continuously
which was so heavy, with responsibilities and pressure
which was turning black, Oh! That un-necessary exposure!



 

© 2017 Pragati Chaudhary


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Nice use of words. You open the door to many questions. You led the reader to many places and thoughts. Thank you Pragati for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


Pragati Chaudhary

6 Years Ago

Thankyou dear Coyote
:)
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

You are welcome Pragati.
So many images flow through the mind,while reading your poem,beautiful in many forms.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Pragati Chaudhary

7 Years Ago

Thankyou Soooooo Much for all the Love Willow!

Keep reading!
Stunning melancholy; heartfelt, heartrending and profoundly touching.
Exceptional work!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Pragati Chaudhary

7 Years Ago

Thankyou Thankyou soo much Jimmy

Your reviews made my day
Amazing imagery in the lines; this is very beautiful :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Pragati Chaudhary

7 Years Ago

Thankyou soo much dear!
Keep reviewing!
Oh! mesmerizing!
I like this line especially:
'Walk around the wide open ground, laugh out loud
shout and cry that heart out.'

Posted 7 Years Ago


Pragati Chaudhary

7 Years Ago

Thankyou soo much dear!

:)
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Ty
heart felt and well written, emotion emotion emotion.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Pragati Chaudhary

7 Years Ago

Ohhhhhh! Thankyou soo much TY
Your words always make my day!
Beautiful words having a deep impact!
Well-written. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Pragati Chaudhary

7 Years Ago

Thankyou soo much :)
Ghania

7 Years Ago

You're welcome. ;)
Wow....the beautiful words are used in the poem, making it more wonderful.
keep on writing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Pragati Chaudhary

7 Years Ago

Thankyou sooooo much for all the Love dear Priyanshi :)
Priyanshi

7 Years Ago

My pleasure.
You have created a beautiful and serene picture with your descriptive words. I liked the entire flow and tone of this poem. Just a suggestion last line would look if it is written,
Which was turning black with unnecessary exposure.


Posted 7 Years Ago


Pragati Chaudhary

7 Years Ago

Ohhhh Thankyou soo much Najam :)
If you are an Indian - Hear the song Nazm Nazm of Bareli Ki .. read more
Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

Yes I am Indian. I will surely listen that song. ☺
Pragati Chaudhary

7 Years Ago

:)

I checked - You are from Hyderabad :D


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Added on September 26, 2017
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Pragati Chaudhary
Pragati Chaudhary

Bhilai, Chhattisgarh, India



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I am a box of thought process in glee! An Indian girl, bit far from the acidic attitudes and unavoidable nuisances. I write when my mind and heart goes for a walk together :) Welcome to my pieces.. more..

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