Six Word Tale#2

Just words

She breathed
oxygen
he kissed her.

Author's Note

Thankyou for reviewing!

Reviews

[augustus]

To the point with no added-on words.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou soooooo much Augustus :)
m soo glad you liked it!

[Akshat♥]

Intelligent write up. Very clever. Keep writing

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thanklyou soo much!

[Zoya]

Aw, thats sweet. Much said in six words. Keep writing!

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou soo much Zoe!

:)

[Zoya]

No problem

[Ashwin Shanker]

Oxygen kissed her? Sorta confused...

[Pragati Chaudhary]

You didnt read that effectively

Read again!

[Ashwin Shanker]

Arrey.... Its just 6 words... How many times shd I read? :P .... Pleaach explain na

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Its like a situation where the girl thought he needs medical help and she tries to give him mouth to mouth
and the guy [Men will be men]
Kissed her!

[Ashwin Shanker]

Hmmm..... Kindly treat this as constructive criticism but the situation which you just explained did not really come across in the tale. I hope other readers would get it in the first read. Cheers

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Okie

Cheers!

[AcasualPawn]

Yes, what you said is not exactly extracted at 1 2 and 3 read....

It seems like guy kissed her and disrupted her oxygen supply... Lol keep writing..

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Hahahahha

Well Fine!
I will