Inside ~

Erotica

Your lips touched
the hem of my nerves
in such a way

It left clusters of your smoothness,
the liquor of your tongue
in which
I dived right in! 

Reviews

[Rahul]

"liquor of tongue???" wow! please yaar Pragati... badi hi mushkil se control kar raha hun, now don't make me flirt with u again. haha! (joking)

jokes apart,
quite the poetry it is... well written & smooched with tender feelings of tequila love. i believe, kiss is a root to one's soul. when u kiss, u ain't just exchange kisses, or feel pleasure, but also... share the goblet of ur soul with another... and allow him/her to claim u his/her territory, of course, either for a moment, for some time/days/nights... or sometimes, for a life as well. and when two love birds r fallen for each other, it's the best and untold moment of life when everything... even ur own despair pain... is all forgotten, and peace with pleasure is all found in those rounded seconds/hungarian minutes of life. such a "cadburry" stuff it is... well drilled & stuffed and lovingly fuled with the magnetism of love-vibes. great job, Pragati!

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyouuuuu Once again Mr. Rooster :D
M elated that you liked it!

[Rahul]

Mr. ... what? Rooster? wow! that's hot! aren't u being fascinating, Pragati? thankfully, didn't call me.. Mr. C**k... or else, i would be asking myself standing in front of a mirror: "Damn! Am i a "C**k"? Haha! ROFL

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Claps for your Insane Mind!

[Hebe]

Hi Pragati, this poem is packed with desire and passion. ....it jumps off the page, excellent:)

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyouuuuuu Soo mucg Hebe
M glad you Loved it
Keep visiting
Keep reviewing!

Love
Pragati

[Hebe]

Your welcome:)

[Akshat♥]

Very touching. Seem like wanting someone badly. And hard to forget the closeness.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Yes! Thankyou soo much Akshat
:)