Arc of reflections ~

Untamed Love

She looked at her scars
and thought about the times
when she was not married
Sitting at the edge of a mountain
puffing the last swag of Air!

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice use of description. Allowed the reader to vision the thoughts and the place. Thank you Pragati for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou for all the Love Dear Coyote

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Vikrantsingh]

Good work Pragati, short one but it carries a lot of meaning - over all surprised me. You started feeling the words and narrated it well.

Nicely penned dear :)

Cheers!
Singh :)

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Long Time Vikrant......
and Thankyou soo much
Im glad you liked it

:)

[Vikrantsingh]

Welcome dear anytime

[Ardra]

very nicely done Pragati

sometimes the ties are too difficult to escape and few find death as the solution to it...

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Yes, Galadriel I understand
Sad yet the truth!

Thankyou for all the Love
Keep reading!

[Mirror]

Seriously? This is quite an information. The abuse is here in my country, but we have stronger singles. I am so sorry.

This is a great piece. It feels like an epitaph of depression.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Here in India
Women are getting to become Independent!

But, as per statistics alomost 7.5% woman kill themselves due to domestic violence!

Thankyou soo much Mirror :)

[Mirror]

okay. :( it is well. Thank you too for writing... :)

[Avinash]

Suicide is a popular and easy escape for marital abuse, but that is no guaranty that the perpetrators will change. But the imagery is quite strong.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

I understand
People dont give a damn to death/Suicide nowadays
But, I am glad u liked it
Thankyou soo much dear :)

[Avinash]

However, surviving suicidal thought and coming out of it is truly heroic. I feel we do not have any right to destroy something which we have not created ourselves. But this is my personal opinion.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Yeah,you are right
I think the same
Suicide is never the solution
But, these kinda cases are happening a lot
Thats why I thought to give it a voice
in a Poetic way, though!

[An owl on the moon]

These scars seem to bleed in the painful recollections of the once-lived freedom. One can hear the sorrowful mourning on the mountains from her suffering skin. So powerful.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

You got that exactly correct Owl

Actually Pain is invincible sometimes, as it leads to that edge from where nothing is visible.

Thankyou for reading and reviewing!
:)

[An owl on the moon]

I appreciate how you carry us across the waves of your journey. :)

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou Soo much owl
Your words and reviews mean a lot to me :)

[AcasualPawn]

Well hot topic of india..........

Keep the good work Pragati

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Yeah that is!

Thankyou SSR

[Najam Us Saher]

This poem breakes the situation of stereotypes I guess. Good attempt.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

She is just being tired of her Pain!
and bringing an end to air/her Life!

:) Thankyou for reviewing!

[Najam Us Saher]

Okay, you're welcome. ☺

[Suchita]

Excuse my asking, but what does arc in your title imply here? Something deep?

Nice , well-written poem, scars adds to various dimensions of poem.

Good work. why untamed love?
Pl discuss your beautiful piece of writing.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Well its kind of deep thought
Well its kind of deep thought
Ill try
Arc of reflections because I believe that there is a line or (border) line, a limit for various things in life. and when you come near that line or limit, it forms the reflection of your destiny or what is meant to happen - Meant to be!
So, that's the Arc of reflection about
Yes, Untamed love and desires or wishes of a girl broken!
so she was about to commit suicide so breathing the last air
I guess I could explain!

Thankyou for this Qn!
I love answering to what i actually felt while writing that!

[Suchita]

you know, I took it in a mathematical sense-arc meaning she's just concerned with her a little part of the full circle of life-her suicidal tendency.

Thanks for clarifying.

Its such a beautiful poem, your poetry makes me think and feel

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Hahahaa

No issue :)
Vaise I like the way you thought too!

[Ashwin Shanker]

was she smoking up? :P
Just asking...hehe.... I liked this as this poem has the SWAG factor as well... A women free from her shackles

[Pragati Chaudhary]

she was about to commit suicide so breathing the last air (Swaaaaagggggg) :D

[Ashwin Shanker]

WHOA WHOA>>>> Swag NIgaa

[Pragati Chaudhary]

hahahahaha

Yo :D