Sea Change

being brave and bold

She was formed of Foam and white clay
Delicate to touch
hard from inside
that's how she erected her Spine
and Strange to believe the transformation
that would last
Forever!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful use of words and thoughts. I enjoyed this poem my friend. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou soo much Coyote :)
Keep reading and keep sharing comments :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome my friend.

[Priyanshi]

I loved the title very much, along with the poem.
the idea of foam and white clay is good.
keep on writing.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou soo much Priyanshi :)

[Priyanshi]

Always a pleasure, dear.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thoughtful, I feel it would be complete when you added what foam and white clay is being transformed to.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

i thought writing she was formed would give the impression of her bones & spine

I'll try to accomodate that::)

Thankyou for those honest reviews Najam :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You are most welcome, I am glad that you took it in a positive way. :)

[Najam Us Saher]

The title says 'sea change' is that correct or you meant 'she'

[Pragati Chaudhary]

No its Sea Change meant a vast change :D

[Pragati Chaudhary]

I did the changes........
Thankyou Najam for pointing it out!

[Najam Us Saher]

You are most welcome. I like it even more now. ☺

[Sameer Jindal]

Few words but expressed it all :)

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou soo much :)

[Ty]

Opened with descriptive and vivid imagery.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou soo much TY :)

[AcasualPawn]

Interesting, simple and short but says so much.......
I like bold Foam and white clay.......
Do you know someone.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Yes, I know Myself :)

[AcasualPawn]

You are old....

[Pragati Chaudhary]

No, I am just not Kiddish!
I had seen and been with fake and corrupt people
and Its now I am well versed!
So, Age or thoughts does not make a person Old!

[AcasualPawn]

Ok..............