HUG

Sometimes all you need is a simple "HUG"

Can i borrow a hug from you?
dont get me wrong or think its new
i just need an assurance that everything`s ok
i know it is but still want to hear you say
its a simple gesture, a warm feeling,
to know someone is there, day or evening
just a hug, no words of wisdom or thoughts
all i need is a human touch of any sort
may be it sound strange even desparate
but friends dont judge nor they complaint
i promise will return it whenever you need
will even love to pay interest if there is
but right now i just need to feel
that you are my real friend indeed............

Reviews

[anant mody]

areeee wwowwww
reallyyy gav me.gusss bumss

keep up good workk miss:-):-):-)

[Laura Lynn]

What a good thought, everything in moderation and hugs, we have something called that yeah. It's sad that there are problems surrounding all things from poverty to lack of affection not to be confused with affectation. I need to feel now. It's funny how we really feel needy for affection so often; it can happen on a minute by minute basis.

[Misha]

Thank you Laura for your lovely review and precious time

[Simran Kewlani]

Hugs definitely heal everything.
Very well written.

[Misha]

Thanks Simran

[M.A.Rathore]

Yes. Undoubtedly hug is a magic touch a person gets from the other vice-versa. The poem is really a fantastic one except some wrong spelt words such as "dont" for don't and so on..If you want to a successful writer you have to improve or consider these less important matter to be thought for betterment...
Nice keep it up!

[Misha]

Thank you so much for the reviews and highlighting my typo errors as well....i do these silly mistakes when i read it in one go then just put it online straight away but now i will make sure to re-read first....thanks again

[M.A.Rathore]

Good.well done. I like it..Keep it up!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

studies shows: hugs could be healing!
and we all need assurance from time to time that everything will be okay.
well written but there are a few errors, i think.
lovely poem!!!
i liked it!!!
:)

[Misha]

Thank you Pushkar i know its late, i value your review

[Pushkar Prabhat]

no worries.......it still counts :) :p........you are welcome!!!