Wounds of breakup

Time heals everything but does it also heal the wounds deep down your bones that are parting gifts of a breakup? The wounds which may be metaphores but they make your life nothing but a nightmare?

More then a year has passed away,

or i must say, has rot away.

But still blood drip like same,

as if water in heavy rain.

Nothing has changed,

nor has healed.

The matters has worsed,

all and all indeed.

Rage and anger has gone to another level,

only difference its not physical, just mental struggle.

Patience is still fighting for its place,

and heart is nowhere to be found in all this mess................

 

Author's Note

Hi guys, i am searching for my path to pursue my dream - writing and would really appreaciate all your comments, suggestions and reviews. Thank you all in advance.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Heartbreak and separation can leave us a mess.
"Patience is still fighting for its place,
and heart is nowhere to be found in all this mess................"
I understand the words above. Easy to become a mess. Hard to see reasons to be fearless. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Misha]

Thank you for the reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.