I Want to Watch You Burn

I want to watch you burn
A fantasy I have
Falling piece by piece
Becoming ash upon the ground

Will it bring me satisfaction
I don't think that I care
I just want to watch you burn
So that you are no more

I have dreamt of so many other ways
I'd like to see you go
But this end seems sufficient
One I think of constantly

I guess the thought does bring me pleasure
And I'm indulging, I suppose
I would gladly watch your ruin
Then finally even, we will be

Call it a grudge that I am holding
It may never go away
Although I have forgave you
I never will forget

I'll move on to somewhere better
I am leaving you behind
Still thinking of you, always
I just want to watch you burn

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

I'm glad you were able to get your dark thoughts out in a positive way instead of going to set someone on fire! Anyways, great poem and I can relate to having such thoughts about certain people sometimes, I won't lie. It helps to have such dark thoughts at times when people have hurt us and it keeps us satisfied. Such power in your heated words! But revenge is not the way, but forgiveness.

[DarkRainbowPie]

Interesting read. It feels almost as though there are some lines left out, like you have more to say. Wanting to watch someone burn is a strong emotion, express it to the max! :)