Don't Leave Me

“Don’t leave me here”… "They're out here and closing in fast, just don't leave me here alone."

He sat forlorn and forgotten, waiting for a response.

"Please, come back," he cried futilely.

He tried to stand to no avail, his leg broken and rendered unusable. The sound in the distance crescendoed into a choir of unearthly howls. Again he tried franticly, but the pain debilitated his spent body.

"Please, whatever you ,don't let me die alone," he spoke just over a whisper knowing it was already to late.

Reviews

[Elim]

This is really sad, and emotional. Although there are some grammar and spelling mistakes, they can be fixed easily. Otherwise, this is such a beautiful piece. Well done!