Solar Furnace

Solar Furnace

A Poem by PoonamRoy
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Traveling through space Wandering atom attracted Varied acceleration race Escape angle detracted

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Traveling through space
Wandering atom attracted
Varied acceleration race
Escape angle detracted

Eternal orbit
Solar towing plane subtracted
Rotating solar furnace smit
Molten surface reacted

Energy absorbed
Heat and pressure smelts
Atomic structure re-orbed
Fused elemental melts

Sinking in surface
Nuclear fusion increases
Instability its purpose
Critical mass point ceases

Finished compaction
Complete and udder chaos
Fission reaction
Energy potential a loss

Upward pressure builds
Super thick liquid belches
Volcanic eruption yields
Swiftly escaping elements
Particles and energy radiants
Massive gravity squelches
Only emitting radiance

© 2012 PoonamRoy


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Wonderful piece of creative imagination.
You had to integrate the difficult jargon of physics and nuclear science in this poem.

I think the word, 'udder' in the penultimate stanza may be 'utter'.
Please have a look.

Posted 11 Years Ago


There is a rhythm that is beyond explanations..

"Energy absorbed
Heat and pressure smelts
Atomic structure re-orbed
Fused elemental melts"................. Really Good Flow.....

Keep Posting...

Posted 11 Years Ago



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PoonamRoy

Mohali, India



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