It's ok

It's ok

A Poem by My scribbles
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A song about someone who is willing to do anything for love. This someone being a brother, a sister, a father, a mother, a friend or a lover.

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It's ok to hold my hand
it's ok to hold it as tight as you want
when your heart is burning with all the sadness
when your shoulders are weighed by loss.
It's ok to let your tears to flow
because i'll be there right by your side
when you need me
when you seek me.

It's ok if my shirt is drenched
it's ok if you want me to shoulder your pain
when there is no one else
i'll be your sheild and shelter
because i know no matter where you are and what you are
i'll always want to be there for you, with you.

It's ok for you to cry
it's ok if you cant form the words
because ill be your eyes and your mouth 
i'll be your love, your friend
your enemy, your hate
i'll be everything you want.
 
It's ok to hold my hand
it's ok to hold it as tight as you want
when your heart is burning with all the sadness
when your shoulders are weighed by loss
it's ok to let your tears to flow
because i'll be there right by your side
when you need me
when you seek me.

© 2016 My scribbles


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My scribbles
Please do forgive if i have made any kind of mistakes while typing. Thankyou

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hi
i like how it ends like it started,and i like how you never rhymed it too,noting wrong with a rhyme just i see a lot of poems do that,keep writing

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

My scribbles

8 Years Ago

thank you so much for your review and i sure will try to write more and better. :)
I loved it! It was very sweet and gentle. I loved the repetition at the end! Great job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

My scribbles

8 Years Ago

thank you :)
I believe you did wonderful. I love how the title relates very well to the poem. Keep up the good work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

My scribbles

8 Years Ago

thank you so much for your review and i hope i can write more wonderful poems :)
AmandaFuller

8 Years Ago

No problem!

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Added on July 11, 2016
Last Updated on July 11, 2016
Tags: #love, #life, #selflesness

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Bangalore, Tavarekere, India



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