Would've

I would've wrote you the finest sonata,
If it meant I could be with you.
I would've wrote you a book telling you how I felt about you,
Because three small words couldn't possibly express it.
I would've done everything you ever wanted you lover to do for you,
Because you deserve it.
I would've told you how long I've loved you,
But you didn't stay long enough.
I would've talked to you all night long,
But I wanted to dream of you.
I would've
But I didn't
And now you're gone.

Author's Note

Please give me some pointers on how to make my writing better?

Also positive comments are equally acceptable and appreciated.

Reviews

[Capitol Virtue]

I am a fan. your pieces are so deep.

[Ponderer Panda]

Thank you c:

I hope you remain one c: