Autumn

Autumn

A Poem by Polly
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It's chilly this evening, and everything reminds me of autumn. :D

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Trotting through skeletal trees,
Leaves crunching under my feet,
The orange-gold leaf crumpling under it.
A gush of wind, and the still leaves,
Flying across the horizon,
Of a chilly autumn evening.

© 2016 Polly


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Ah, the coming of Autumn, with the smells, colors, rains, winds and a slight chill. Actually my favorite time of year. I welcome it. Lovely poem. Thank you for sharing!

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is a nice description of Autumn. Simplistic yet beautiful.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Polly

8 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
Now, this is what I call beautiful :)....
Very well written.
I must say Polly ..you rock :) :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Polly

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Gorthi! You just made my day, haha. :)
A perfect snapshot of my favorite season of the four -- Autumn. :)
Very easy to visualize these lines, the imagery stands strong, and the pacing is up to par.
Great job as always, Polly!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Polly

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words, Sante!
Asante

8 Years Ago

My pleasure!

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