Melted Rain

This is a poem expressing my new, profound freedom. I would be "free, free at last".

The rain melted down my face

swallowing my tears.

All that stood left was a simple melody

and a solemn goodbye.

The sun's dignity swept through the clouds

destroying my pain.

Light would regain my strength.

There stood hope in my presence

that would one day abolish my insecurities.

Away with doubt once so prominently unforgotten.

I would be free,

free at last.

Author's Note

Please let me know what you think :)

Reviews

[Heromen Selena]

seems a little short lived. maybe more visual aid would be good, but other than that it seems good :)