~Bullies gone Fatal~

I wrote this in school when I was doing home work. Haha.(:

You bullied me the other day. 
You bullied me, your new best friend. 
I thought you were always there for me, I guess I was wrong. 
You started those rumors, it was you all along. 
You said you didn't, I guess that's a lie. 
You bullied me the other day. 
You bullied me, your ex best friend. 
I don't think your my best friend anymore.

You pretended that I could trust you,

Betrayal is all that happened.

I now think maybe I should no longer share my secrets.

Betrayal is all you did, there is no way I can forgive it.

You bullied me the other day,

You bullied me, and you lost a friend.

Author's Note

I know the grammar probably isn't all that good, just please don't post rude comments.

Reviews

[Matthew Ian Herrawood W]

I was entering poems in your contest and then woundering if you would actually be able to read one of my poems because of the age restriction i checked out your page and saw this. I hate Bullying and suffer from post traumatic stress because of it. The phsycologist was surprised i hadent comitted suicide because of it. i felt the emotion of this poem easily and heard the story behind it. When i read it i felt as if I were the bully and you were telling me all this its well written and flows well too. an enjoyable read.

[Irishbabies]

Wow....is all I can say its amazing is exactly how I feel. :)

[Pinky Dinky Doo]

i like it good job :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

It slaps the wrists in all of us to stand up and pay attention, a well written piece, well done, good read.

[NovaeSpes]

This is the best poem I have ever read your poems are the most amazing and I think your even better then me.