~Hope~

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Why is it I'm different? Why is it i'm treated this way? The harsh words, the violence. Why? It seems the only way out is to grab a sharp blade, and draw. A tragic picture. On my wrist. Not just a picture, But a story. A story of hope, story of life,

Story of sadness... A picture, bright red with the color ofblood. The red drops falling from my arm, staining the floor as the puddle grows... The picture will grow, getting deeper and deeper... Until I no longer live. Until the story is left unfinished... All because of you. The picture shows a word, Only one... A word with a huge meaning, The picture, scarred into the no longer living flesh... Shows something I never had, But always wanted.... "Hope".

Author's Note

Ignore grammar problems please! And please comment opinions!

Reviews

[NovaeSpes]

I'm truly sad you feel this was, many people feel this way but don't say much, I loved how you put it all together, where it says...
scarred into the no longer living flesh...
Shows something I never had,
But always wanted....
"Hope".
it was bone chilling those last lines really hit it home I very much enjoy your writing but this...this was so powerful and meaningful, it screamed with emotion and pain, it was brilliantly written! Really good job here!!

[Scott Metro]

Cheer up...there are many good people here.....read some write some.
Be a part of us.

I understand your anguish.
Scott