~In The Darkness~

~In The Darkness~

A Poem by Sarah Greaton
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I wrote this today on a way to my friend's house.. Hope you like it!

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Climbing out from the deep shadows of the world,

Trying to escape the cruelness of all these crimes,

Murders and frauds...

Away from all the gossipers and fake friends.

Away from the enemies,

The part of your family who could care less,

Away from all harm.

Why do I have to live in this world?

I would rather be in a world where all friends are true,

Where there would not be any crime,

No murders,

No fake friends,

No back stabbers.

Instead,

I am stuck in this cruel world,

But.... WHY?

© 2012 Sarah Greaton


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Sarah Greaton
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Your writing is fantastic. I love it, I like reading your poems, they are always very well written!!!


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sarah Greaton

4 Years Ago

Thank you!
I would rather be in a world where all friends are true,

Where there would not be any crime,

No murders,

No fake friends,

No back stabbers.
A good wish and message...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sarah Greaton

11 Years Ago

Thank you! And yes, it is isn't it? I try to be inspirational, instead of just writing words, I try .. read more
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

I agree . You are welcome ...:)
Sarah Greaton

11 Years Ago

:D
That's a lovely poem. It's so true and people can relate to it. Nice one

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sarah Greaton

11 Years Ago

Thank you! :D

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Added on December 23, 2012
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Tags: Darkness, Why, Crime, Pain