Writer's block

Light inside the pen-
hidden as is past abuse;
unable to shine.

Reviews

[Rambling Prose]

I can't really add any more than what's already been said Below. I embrace her thoughts on this nicely written Haiku...

[justjenn_2u]

Light inside the pen...... I envision so much thought bottled up.
Hidden as past abuse.......I find it amazing the symbolism you give to past abuse as to poetry. Nice comparison, because many times we can't talk about our abuse as words will sometimes NEVER come out.
unable to shine......... A beauty locked away for none to see. I like this.
This is thought provoking Haiku. Enjoyable.

[Antony]

Excellent is all I need to say Tony. I am a writer of Haiku myself so I am very aware of your ability to tell a story with just a few lines.
Antony

[Lauren Xena Campbell]

This is a wonderful haiku, you certainly don't seem to have writers block. For so few words I found a lot of enjoyment in this and thought it well crafted. Good one ;-)