Live, Love and Burn

Not as harsh as it sounds. I missed you writers cafe. Its good to be back.

Life is hard.
Hard enough without others in the way.
The world is tough.
Tough enough to knock you down.
People are blind.
Blind enough to pass you without noticing your troubles.
But people are kind.
Kind enough to stand by your side.
Frankly, life is a living hell,
Unless you have someone who'll burn with you.

Author's Note

I hope you enjoyed it. I have finally come out of my shell of innocence. Watch me bloom.

Reviews

[Calamity]

Really highlights the value of having a good support circle of friends and family, makes life worth living.
Despite the bad moments. Honest and truthful.

[PoetryPenPal]

Thank you very much.

[icelandicblue]

Great line at the end. You've now entered your teenage years and where life begins to look different than when you were a child. I feel that in your words.

[PoetryPenPal]

Thank you very much. I'm not a child anymore. I've changed a lot.

[icelandicblue]

I can see that!

[katnisscat]

Burn with you, or burn for you

[PoetryPenPal]

Thanks katnisscat. I'm glad you read my poem.

[katnisscat]

Yeah, I like it.