She Lowered Her Knife, and It Grew Even Brighter

Insired by the picture and caption (title) by Harris Burdick. Please take time to review the picture.

    She drew her knife. The glowing pumpkin sat on the table, waiting. As the knife was lowered, the pumpkin grew brighter. It stood waiting for the knife to slice through it's thick skin. Now, even though the pumpkin had thick skin, it was very hurt by the fact that the girl wanted to slice it to pumpkin pie. So there the pumpkin stood, waiting for the pain,the knife, the girl. Waiting for a death that would be silent, unknow and delicious.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Jennifer]

You should enter this in for a halloween poetry contest.

[PoetryPenPal]

That is a very good idea. Thank you for reading!

[Jennifer]

You are welcome. ;)

[LadyAnn68]

WOW doesn't it make you feel sorry for the dying pumpkin? It did me! The pumpkin want to show how much he could shine for her and instead he died for her! Interesting concept.

[PoetryPenPal]

Thank you very much. I thought I could slip a new concept in there. I'm very glad you liked it!

[Emmy]

Through this I felt so many emotions! I didn't know whether to be scared or not! It made this interesting. Nice write! I can't wait to read more

[PoetryPenPal]

Thank you do much for reading. I promise something new will come up soon!

[Emmy]

Anytime!:)

[PoetryPenPal]

:-).............................

[Sami Khalil]

A unique write on the pumpkin. I like how you personified it...Bravo............

[PoetryPenPal]

Thank you very much. I'm very glad you enjoyed it.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)......................