Somebody
A Poem by
PoetryPenPal
For evreyone who hasn't found a point in life.
I'm not just,
Somebody.
I'm not just,
Here.
I've got,
Feelings.
I've got,
Reasons.
I don't just'
Live.
I don't just,
Die.
I let life,
Flow.
I let life,
Happen.
But I still,
Think.
I still,
Love.
Though love is,
Great.
Though love is,
Everlasting,
I just can't love
You
© 2014 PoetryPenPal
Author's Note
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Featured Review
Nice to see the separation of "love" and "love for someone"... love is everlasting no matter if people are together or go their own way. So many think they cant live without someone, but how were they alive before? did they forget? Anyhoo, great write...
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!
Reviews
Nice to see the separation of "love" and "love for someone"... love is everlasting no matter if people are together or go their own way. So many think they cant live without someone, but how were they alive before? did they forget? Anyhoo, great write...
Posted 10 Years Ago
Nice to see the separation of "love" and "love for someone"... love is everlasting no matter if people are together or go their own way. So many think they cant live without someone, but how were they alive before? did they forget? Anyhoo, great write...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!
Oh you penned this so well my little penpal.I really did not see that ending coming .Loved it :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
Oh you penned this so well my little penpal.I really did not see that ending coming .Loved it :)
10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
You are welcome :)
What a good job you did here. The ending was not what I expected and that was the jewel of the poem!
Posted 10 Years Ago
What a good job you did here. The ending was not what I expected and that was the jewel of the poem!
10 Years Ago
Thanks for reading!
Good work in this one, keep writing my friend
Posted 10 Years Ago
Good work in this one, keep writing my friend
"But I still,
Think.
I still,
Love.
Though love is,
Great."
So beautiful and worth reading. I like the form you used too...:).............
Posted 10 Years Ago
"But I still,
Think.
I still,
Love.
Though love is,
Great."
So beautiful and worth reading. I like the form you used too...:).............
10 Years Ago
Thanks for reading!
10 Years Ago
You are welcome...:)...............................
To open the door to love. It hard to do. Seem like more pain and valley than sweetness and good days. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 10 Years Ago
To open the door to love. It hard to do. Seem like more pain and valley than sweetness and good days. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
10 Years Ago
Thank you for reading!
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Added on April 22, 2014
Last Updated on April 22, 2014
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