Somebody

Somebody

A Poem by PoetryPenPal
"

For evreyone who hasn't found a point in life.

"

I'm not just,

Somebody.

I'm not just,

Here.

I've got,

Feelings.

I've got,

Reasons.

I don't just'

 Live.

I don't just,

Die.

I let life,

Flow.

I let life,

Happen.

But I still,

Think.

I still,

Love.

Though love is,

Great.

Though love is,

Everlasting,

I just can't love

You

© 2014 PoetryPenPal


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PoetryPenPal
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Nice to see the separation of "love" and "love for someone"... love is everlasting no matter if people are together or go their own way. So many think they cant live without someone, but how were they alive before? did they forget? Anyhoo, great write...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

PoetryPenPal

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!



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Nice to see the separation of "love" and "love for someone"... love is everlasting no matter if people are together or go their own way. So many think they cant live without someone, but how were they alive before? did they forget? Anyhoo, great write...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

PoetryPenPal

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!
Oh you penned this so well my little penpal.I really did not see that ending coming .Loved it :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


PoetryPenPal

10 Years Ago

Thanks for reading!
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
What a good job you did here. The ending was not what I expected and that was the jewel of the poem!

Posted 10 Years Ago


PoetryPenPal

10 Years Ago

Thanks for reading!
Good work in this one, keep writing my friend

Posted 10 Years Ago


"But I still,
Think.
I still,
Love.
Though love is,
Great."

So beautiful and worth reading. I like the form you used too...:).............

Posted 10 Years Ago


PoetryPenPal

10 Years Ago

Thanks for reading!
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)...............................
To open the door to love. It hard to do. Seem like more pain and valley than sweetness and good days. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


PoetryPenPal

10 Years Ago

Thank you for reading!

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Added on April 22, 2014
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