Riddle

Your secrets are locked in a cage,

And the key is hidden in

The rhythm of the words you speak.

The tongues in which your words are twisted in

Make my mind whirl with your brainteaser, your words.

Your mind is twisted into a cruel game,

But I can't stay away.

You pull me in with your many tongues,

And keep me in with your secrets.

I'm possessed by the hum of your words, soothing me.

Suddenly, a warmth comes over me.

I feel your secret, your love for me.

Author's Note

Please enjoy! Reviews are appreciated!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Some riddles do have good ending.
"Suddenly, a warmth comes over me.
I feel your secret, your love love for me."
I like the above lines. It is always good when we find love and joy as the secret being held. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

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Thank you so much for the review. I wanted to be cherry for once.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hunny this was some excellent poetry.I loved every line my little poetry pal :)

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Thanks a lot Vidya.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome hunny :)

[A. Amos]

Great piece and your writing and message was spot on, keep on writing...

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Thank you very much.

[Sami Khalil]

A wonderful riddle and poem. I really enjoyed the read too...:)

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Thank you very much Sami!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome PenPal..................