Trapped

Eyes,

Watching.

A heart,

Hurting.

A mind,

Racing.

A gentle touch

Burning.

A cry, a tear

Silence.

 

I've never heard it

So loud

Yet so... quiet.

What have I done to deserve this?

A sentence never given a second thought,

Innocence,

No,

Guilt.

Author's Note

Please enjoy! Reviews are greatly appreciated.

Reviews

[Maddi Snowden]

This is so sad like really good language but overall it's sad. But sadness is great. I think that it evokes feeling and that's really something.

[writ rajat]

its completely emotional poem its describes the feeling

[PoetryPenPal]

Thank you very much!

[writ rajat]

you r wlcm

[Coyote Poetry]

You are a amazing young writer. Your description create thoughts and sad emotion. I wanted to know and read more. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[PoetryPenPal]

Thank you so much Coyote!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hey my little PPenpal.This was Sad and we all feel it sometimes :)

[PoetryPenPal]

Thank you for your comment Vidya!

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)