Kiss

A sunset smeared

On a cloud stricken sky.

 

The color of the wind

And the sound of a sigh.

 

The blushing cheeks

Of a secret lover,

 

That will love you more

Than any other.

 

The kiss that brings

Warmth to his cheeks,

 

And you blush as well

You feel compleate.

 

A song that rings

Right through the air,

 

And the love of your life

Stands right there.

 

It was the best day 

Of your life,

 

When you were pronounced

Husband and wife.

Author's Note

Please enjoy! Reviews are greatly appreciated!

Reviews

[wordman]

a lovely poem of marriage,well done

[PoetryPenPal]

thank you very much, word man.

[wordman]

you are welcome

[Maddi Snowden]

I adore the first stanza, so creative and fun. This is a really cute poem!!

[PoetryPenPal]

Thank you very much Maddi!

[Thaddius]

beautiful language, especially the first 2 couplets. 'Smeared...cloud stricken' - this is awesome.

[PoetryPenPal]

Thank you!

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is so beautiful my friend.Well written :)

[PoetryPenPal]

Thank you very much!

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[CMPurrett]

You have an amazing gift! Please keep sharing your work.

[PoetryPenPal]

Of course. Thank you so much!

[prodicallife]

Dear writer,

You are amazing with your thoughts and words.

Beautiful, simple and romantic.

Very good write.

Keep writing great!

Stay blessed
Prodical

[PoetryPenPal]

Thank you very much!

[Praveeta]

This is so romantic. Thanks for creating a lovely piece.

[PoetryPenPal]

No, thank you for reading and reviewing.

[Praveeta]

My pleasure.

[LadyAnn68]

OMG this is totally the greatest ever....I applaud and salute this work of art!

[PoetryPenPal]

Thank you so much!!!!!!!

[LadyAnn68]

Maybe you since you are such a profound writer...could check out my latest ...it was my second try at a love content! If I could Have One Wish...A Love Story.... pleaSe? review is needed!

[PoetryPenPal]

Thank you for asking me to do this. I will gladly read it and review it.

[LadyAnn68]

I trust you after reading this! I will keep this poem with your permission, but need to know h=who to give the credit to? Poetry Pen Pal?

[PoetryPenPal]

What do you mean?

[LadyAnn68]

If I were to show it to others who do I say write this...PoetryPe Pal? I want to make sure it is OK with you to show this to others.....it is sooooo beautiful!

[PoetryPenPal]

Yes. That would be just fine. Please just use PoetryPenPal. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much!

[LadyAnn68]

It is to me...tremendous! Thank you!

[PoetryPenPal]

No problem.....:-)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This is a great poem, its extremely romantic, so full of emotion and meaning.
Beautiful piece, it also flows really well, and the rhymes are great to :)
Well written :)

[PoetryPenPal]

Thanks alot!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your welcome

[Sami Khalil]

A very sweet and lovely poem. The ending was marvelous...:).................

[PoetryPenPal]

Thanks Sami!!!!!!!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome:).................................