Winter

 

Winter#2

    The bitter, coldness of the air nips your skin, despite your several layers of clothes, including your couple of scarves, mittens, and your hat. Whenever you exhale, your breath curls like smoke from a dragon’s snout, dissolving quickly in the frigid wind. Then when you inhale, your throat stings from the cold. Snow crunches under your boots and falls from the sky, resembling tiny angles. Hot chocolate is steaming in the warm house that waits in front of you. There is also a fireplace that will dry your wet clothes and melt the snow in your eyelashes. Winter has arrived!

     

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful Winter tale. Winter does allow us to appreciate hot drinks and a warm place. Thank you for sharing the excellent story.
Coyote

[PoetryPenPal]

Thank you for the great review and for reading!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well written and described so vividly.Great job :)

[PoetryPenPal]

Thank you so much!

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Praveeta]

Lovely description of winter. Nicely penned.

[PoetryPenPal]

Thank you so much!

[Praveeta]

You are welcome Poetry Penpal.

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[Maddy]

Perfectly describes winter. Great job. One thing though, it should be angels instead of angles. Lovely write.

[PoetryPenPal]

Thank you so much for correcting this silly mistake and reading!

[Maddy]

You're welcome!

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[Maddy]

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[Sami Khalil]

"Whenever you exhale, your breath curls like smoke from a dragon’s snout, dissolving quickly in the frigid wind. Then when you inhale, your throat stings from the cold."

A very powerful , descriptive poem...Bravo........................

[PoetryPenPal]

THANK YOU SO MUCH SAMI!

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)......................