Diversion

Diversion

A Poem by PoetryPenPal
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This is a poem about two lovers being seperated. Enjoy!

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Tears leave streaks

All down your cheeks

And words come out Like daggers.

Blood pours out

Our pierced hearts

And we finally fall apart.

Small sense remains

In our confused brains

All we know is that its over.

We'll go separate ways

For the rest of our days

'Cause this is the final goodbye.

© 2013 PoetryPenPal


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A well written poem of sadness. I like your use of description. Allowed the reader to feel the sadness and the goodbye. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


I agree. Thank you for commenting on my poem. It makes me feel better.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Saying goodbye is hard, sometimes to hard and it makes us cry. But we must learn to let go and have hope that it will be better. Maybe you'll meet a new friend ;-)

Sincerely Panda

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on December 14, 2013
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