Torn

After a week of... well, hardship, this is what came out...

"Nothing can be lost if nothing was gained... But, that also works the opposite way..."

Find a piece inside of me and hold it
Find something with in me and cherish it
Hold it close to your soul and embrace it
Find the truth, we can seek it

Hide away from me now
Behind your mask
Shadows creep and roam

Behind your smiles
Your tears they fall
They cry out, they moan

I cry out for something more
Something to hold
It fell down
That's worth more than gold

This heart that you held
This piece that I can't drop
I know what's going on
I know it's not lost

My fears have come true
I see me and I see you
You're fading away into pieces
I'm being torn into shreads

Soon, I'll be lost in the sea of the dead
One day you shall find it
The end is yet to be near
No more crying...

I have nothing left to fear...

Reviews

[Comatose]

Wow...this is really touching. Your word choice and emotion flows flawlessly together. Well done. :)