MIND

Yellow Butterfly

Do you ever wonder how the mind functions within our brain...

 

Creating thoughts of pure genius, that could also be seen as insane..

Where do these thoughts come from that consume our whole 

existence...

Allowing our minds to wonder as we look out into the distance...

But what really happens to those minds that wonder into the unknown...

A mind full of pure confusion and despair, impossible to be shown...

Losing your mind would be such a terrible thing, what an 

unimaginable thought...

Keep protecting it and feeding it with activities, and never become

distraught...

If you delve deeper into this mind of yours don't be surprised as to 

what you might find...

Never underestimate the universal powers of a conscious and 

subconscious......beautiful mind.

Reviews

[Laerrus]

Food for thought.. quite literally. Nicely structured poem.

[J Todd Underhill]

Ah and you do have a beautiful mind, one that seems to be wanting to grow at the moment. I like watching that in people. I too like this sentiment of this poem!

[Tai Ryens]

I loved the ending! It was beautiful, made me wonder how a simple mind can come up with such complex things, yet some simple things. Really got me thinking, great job!

[Otsana]

This is a really good poem and it really got me thinking so good job!