WHY?

Black Butterfly

Why do we do it.. opening our minds to the world...

Seeking a strangers approval on our thoughts and feelings told...

Why do we do it.. telling everyone what's on our mind....

When truth be known, all they want to do is be unkind....

Why do we do it, sharing all what's deep within..

To then be criticized by a total stranger.. who doesn't get your thing..

The reason why we do it is because we have something to reveal..

Kind words of love and support for those who need....to heal!

Reviews

[paparapapa]

I loved how you sounded pessimistic at first, but ended sounding positive. And I totally agree with the message of your poem. Keep on writing. ;)

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

you asked questions that needed to be asked for us to understand...great poem

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Good questions :)

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any time we share ourselves, we are opening ourselves up to the criticism of the others..being comfortable in ourselves means that it doesn't matter what others thinks ..wonderful sentiment ..