Wet

stepping into the unknown
she turns on his tap of ecstasy
pouring into her soul like rain
tasteless… yet she can taste him
transparent…but she sees him
odourless…except she smells him
every inch of him consumes her
cascading rapidly like a waterfall
seeping into all of her orifices
soaking deep into her skin
making fluvial channels
embedded within
awakening every hair follicle
a sensation of rapturous delight
an overpowering emotion
the only way she can let him in
is to surrender her all to him
eyes closed she starts to rub
each stroke expressing a
deeper love
she explores all around
discovering new
sensations to be found
she’s totally saturated from
head to toe..aroused
she lathers her body
stimulating her senses
running hands over
her pleasure spots
releasing her creative juices
in all of her sensitive places
she’s swollen and moist
water pressure of
pleasures awaits her
from tantric breathing
hear her shallow breaths
feeling liberated
from all these sensations
in her body a frenzy
of poetic inspiration
she can’t hold back
drowning in him yet
she knows he’s not here
he’s in her thoughts
and in that very moment

she cums….

just like that!

Reviews

[Pete]

just like that. wow. talk about getting off on poetry. an unexpected shuttering crescendo of a climax. title is really telling. very real, creative and erotic ... :)

[John the Baptist]

Very well handled erotica here. Loved the sense of buildup and mounting tension, followed by the sudden release. Would love to hear a spoken version of this one.