I don't really like haikus half the time, but this one works well. Its nice to think of them as more than angelsh** like my brothers used to tell me when I was a kid -_-
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Hahaha.... my sisters and brothers had the same kind of sentiment towards me then and even now.. read moreHahaha.... my sisters and brothers had the same kind of sentiment towards me then and even now..
Thanks for spending some time reading my work... no been on here for a while...
This command of scripture to think about lovely things, and haiku discipline of the mind, I wish all those snowflakes were falling here now, there are many snowflakes not just one, sometimes take long time as they become blocks of ice, going from one microscopic image to incredible volume of vein-like life pattern
I must have been channelling you YB - I commented on a review there that snowflakes are here and gone (echoing a reviewers thoughts at the time) - like messengers - I hadnt even read this. I hope you don't think Im nicking your ideas my friend.
Now for the review - I was so glad to read a haiku - (I have been getting through 1200 reviews cause i went away for a year and didnt close the profile and the number of haikus in that lot is miniscule).
I miss the eloquent simplicity and lightness of the style. Thanks for re-pubbing this one.
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Beautiful haiku! And what an appropriate metaphor...snowflakes, in many ways, do seem angelic, especially when they land directly on your nose. I like to think that God (or whatever presence you may have faith in) is omnipresent, and snowflakes are a wonderful reminder of that.