Break My Code....

 

A spontaneous

fervour takes

over me as you

lead me to

the dance floor

You take me

in your arms

I’m about

to combust

You have the

combination

to my heart

Go ahead and

Break my code

Take your time

move real slow

You know just what

buttons to press

Pulling me closer

Breathing life into me

Cannot resist

Cannot hold back

Cannot pretend

I am weakened

to my very core

Unable to move

Unable to breathe

Unable to speak

I crumble

My answer is yes

I’m ready to let go

No words are spoken

the music plays

Your moves are

Delicious

 Delectable

Desirable

Even though

there’s a crowd

It’s you and me

  music intensifies

Break my code

 Losing self-control

no inhibitions

you penetrate

deep inside my soul

Rhythmically

moving to and fro

 Succumbed to the

sounds of your

raging pulses

Lost in our own

ensemble

of crescendos

Devouring me

inch by inch

You feel me

You taste me

You hear my

heart speaking

It’s at this point

I realise you

broke my code...

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Tom]

You create heated intensity through your poetic dance poems, despite the packed floor the couple are only aware of each other's strong magnetic attraction as they gyrate to the rhythmic beat!

Splendid Yellow Butterfly, bet you are looking forward to Brucie and the new Strictly come dancing programme starting on telly soon!

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you Tom... I love the time you put in to review my work .... you understand my passion... music and dance go hand in hand...

YES!!! Can't wait....

[Tom]

Agree totally YB !

[BL]

You have created a great pattern in this poem to tell your story of the code and how it was broken. Nice length of sentences that made my eyes fall down the page, just right to match the increasing tempo of events being described.

[Yellow Butterfly]

Loving your review Bluely :O)

[Dye]

I love the flow of this, once I started reading it I was pulled in and could feel the passion behind it. A great read!

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thanks for your lovely review Dye.. :O)

[Lydia Shutter]

The speeding up of the rhythm added to the urgency of desire and passion in this well written poem. The change in font color was effective. You took the reader round and round....and up and down....on the dance floor. Incredible poetry! Lydi**

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you so much Lydia for taking time out to stop by and review... glad you liked it... :O)

[ANTO]

I went into full Tom Hanks - Da Vinci Code - mode there YB - looking at the 3 C's, the 3 U's, the 3 D's and the 3 Y's and then I fell at the last hurdle - is there a code ???

I loved the quick-slow-quick-quick-slow of this and the climax was breath-taking. Encore - more of this 'dancing' would be beneficial I think...

X

[Yellow Butterfly]

Awwh Anto your just too kool for skool...lol... you are a perceptive man indeed.... Is there a code... hmmmmmm now that would be telling... xx

[ANTO]

Aha! My OCD is finally paying off then YB - lol
X

[Yellow Butterfly]

lol.... a few more tries... then I think you might have cracked it... xx

[ANTO]

Im sending it to Bletchley Park YB - its an enigma - now you've let the fox among the chickens.
read moreIm sending it to Bletchley Park YB - its an enigma - now you've let the fox among the chickens.
X

[Yellow Butterfly]

Let me know how you get on.. :)

x

[ANTO]

Will do... lol
Thank you
X

[ANTO]

I brought in our finest brain YB - he sees no code - lol. So was this the perfect piece of disinformation wrapped up in a perfect poem? *waves white flag*...

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Wow... that did something to me. Though my eyes were flowing downwards, I had the sensation of floating upwards while reading this!

[Yellow Butterfly]

There's just something about music and dance and all that comes with it..... I guess my words leaves no stone unturned.... I write from my heart and music fuels me.... Thanks T :O)

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

It shows and it shows excellently!

[Glen Yumang Manese]

the words seems to dance in this one...as I read down the lines...thanks for the invite...

[Yellow Butterfly]

Can you tell.... I love to dance .... Thank you for your warm words Glen... :O)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I believe you picture gives that away...you're welcome...

[Yellow Butterfly]

:O) hehe

[Plume de flamme]

Oh Ms. Butterfly. This is a strong one. Very intense.

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thanks for taking time out to read my work... much appreciated :O)

[Sami Khalil]

"Lost in our own

ensemble

of crescendos

Devouring me

inch by inch

You feel me

You taste me

You hear my

heart speaking"
Whoa. That was one of the most intense , passionate readings I came across. Dancing with power and rising with heat...:)

[Yellow Butterfly]

Awwwh... thank you Sami.... I love it when I know my words..... have an impact.... and your words always have an impact too so thank you once more dear friend and poet.. :O)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure. Any time...:)

[Frieda P]

Woooooooooooo, this is hot, dancing the vertical mambo. 'Break my code' love it, very stirring YB!

[Yellow Butterfly]

Awww... thanks Fp... glad you enjoyed .... :0)

[Frieda P]

My jeans are feeling very inadequate right now. ;-) Great one YB!

[Yellow Butterfly]

No way..... Fp.... I am sure you look fabulous in yours ..... thank you soo much... :O)

[Frieda P]

No one's trying to break the code Lol My pleasure always friend.

[Yellow Butterfly]

Lol...... Fp.... your too funny for words... love your energy on here... you make me smile.....

[Frieda P]

Could you relay that message to my son, he says I'm not one bit funny!