Break My Code....
A Poem by Yellow Butterfly
A spontaneous
fervour takes
over me as you
lead me to
the dance floor
You take me
in your arms
I’m about
to combust
You have the
combination
to my heart
Go ahead and
Break my
code
Take your time
move real slow
You know just what
buttons to press
Pulling me closer
Breathing life into me
Cannot resist
Cannot hold back
Cannot pretend
I am weakened
to my very core
Unable to move
Unable to breathe
Unable to speak
I crumble
My answer is yes
I’m ready to let go
No words are spoken
the music plays
Your moves are
Delicious
Delectable
Desirable
Even though
there’s a crowd
It’s you and me
music intensifies
Break my
code
Losing self-control
no inhibitions
you penetrate
deep inside my soul
Rhythmically
moving to and fro
Succumbed to the
sounds of your
raging pulses
Lost in our own
ensemble
of crescendos
Devouring me
inch by inch
You feel me
You taste me
You hear my
heart speaking
It’s at this point
I realise you
broke my code...
© 2021 Yellow Butterfly
Author's Note
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Reviews
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I feel this! Great exploration of dance
Love dancing!
Posted 3 Years Ago
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Wowza. A deeply beautiful poem.
We all need someone to break down out walls and make us feel special.
Posted 3 Years Ago
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so erotic building up to an explosive crescendo. takes one's breath away. clever ending. certainly has all the right ingredients ... :)
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
I think so....thanks Pete :)
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3 Years Ago
makes me wish i had become a spy skilled in codebreaking ... :)
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3 Years Ago
It's in there....hidden in plain sight............... :)
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Impressive and erotic. I love it!
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Free falling cadence of emotive release tempo is perfect heart beating in time with ME!
Thrilling read, must have been exiting to express this song of a poem...100/100
Rossen
Posted 10 Years Ago
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A very fast piece...would make great lyrics for a song...
Posted 10 Years Ago
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This is fantastic! It feels like the words are dancing, just great flow; just a few mispelled words but ither than that its great!
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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This was very romantic and the song goes great:)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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A dance so sexy it consumes you to the core!... No wonder your code is broken. ;)
I loved this sultry piece... you truly make your readers sweat! lol
Luscious write!~xoxo~
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you Robbie aka Poetic Seduction.. (loving your new name.. :O) )
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Cool stuff YB. Really like your triple repetition stanzas..
"Cannot resist
Cannot hold back
Cannot pretend"
I like how you sprinkle them around your piece. Great emphasis. ^_^
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you D.W.A... :o)
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