Break My Code....

 

A spontaneous

fervour takes

over me as you

lead me to

the dance floor

You take me

in your arms

I’m about

to combust

You have the

combination

to my heart

Go ahead and

Break my code

Take your time

move real slow

You know just what

buttons to press

Pulling me closer

Breathing life into me

Cannot resist

Cannot hold back

Cannot pretend

I am weakened

to my very core

Unable to move

Unable to breathe

Unable to speak

I crumble

My answer is yes

I’m ready to let go

No words are spoken

the music plays

Your moves are

Delicious

 Delectable

Desirable

Even though

there’s a crowd

It’s you and me

  music intensifies

Break my code

 Losing self-control

no inhibitions

you penetrate

deep inside my soul

Rhythmically

moving to and fro

 Succumbed to the

sounds of your

raging pulses

Lost in our own

ensemble

of crescendos

Devouring me

inch by inch

You feel me

You taste me

You hear my

heart speaking

It’s at this point

I realise you

broke my code...

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Samith Pich]

I feel this! Great exploration of dance

Love dancing!

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wowza. A deeply beautiful poem.
We all need someone to break down out walls and make us feel special.

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you!

[Re-Pete]

so erotic building up to an explosive crescendo. takes one's breath away. clever ending. certainly has all the right ingredients ... :)

[Yellow Butterfly]

I think so....thanks Pete :)

[Re-Pete]

makes me wish i had become a spy skilled in codebreaking ... :)

[Yellow Butterfly]

It's in there....hidden in plain sight............... :)

[Jen Yarrington]

Impressive and erotic. I love it!

[Rossen]

Free falling cadence of emotive release tempo is perfect heart beating in time with ME!



Thrilling read, must have been exiting to express this song of a poem...100/100


Rossen

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

A very fast piece...would make great lyrics for a song...

[Inda]

This is fantastic! It feels like the words are dancing, just great flow; just a few mispelled words but ither than that its great!

[00000000000000000000000..]

This was very romantic and the song goes great:)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

A dance so sexy it consumes you to the core!... No wonder your code is broken. ;)

I loved this sultry piece... you truly make your readers sweat! lol

Luscious write!~xoxo~

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you Robbie aka Poetic Seduction.. (loving your new name.. :O) )

[David Wesley]

Cool stuff YB. Really like your triple repetition stanzas..

"Cannot resist

Cannot hold back

Cannot pretend"

I like how you sprinkle them around your piece. Great emphasis. ^_^

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you D.W.A... :o)