Me.....

Senryu

This is my reveal
All you can see are my eyes
Windows to my soul

Author's Note

Reviews

[Tom]

The eyes tell so much of a person's intellect and general well-being and this pair look in tip, top condition to me!

[Yellow Butterfly]

haha thank you Tom... :O)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

And a Beautiful Soul you have!!

I love the reveal... it's always nice to see through the window... what a magnificent view of those sparkling eyes!~xoxo~:)

[BL]

Nice to see you to see you nice

[Yellow Butterfly]

Ditto.. your a star Bluely.... :O)

[Pax]

a pretty eyes my friend...
it is nice to see you...
the window to our souls speaks much more than our actions...

[Yellow Butterfly]

Lovely words Pax... thank you :O)

[Jibey]

Simply delightful... inviting and captivating

[Yellow Butterfly]

Aww thank you for stopping by and catching me in.. :O)

[David Wesley]

Hello there!

Hehe.. it's a cute and simple scheme. So much can be told by someone's expression, yet your poem says so much more =) Will you reveal anything else? ^_^

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you... hehe hmmm maybe.. ! :O)

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Windows they are... revealing indeed. Is that tenderness I see? ;)

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thanks PH.. :O)

[Sami Khalil]

Eyes are the windows to the soul and intentions are the paths to the heart. You have revealed a lot...Splendid...:)

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you Sami.... :O)

[Sami Khalil]

You re welcome...:)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

The eyes are the souls of the truth...you did well with this 575...the music is upbeat...

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thanks Glen.... glad you enjoyed the music too.. :O)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

A different out look with the music...give a bit more to the verse...

[Frieda P]

Telling Senryu, soulful eyes. You've shared more than you know...well done YB!

[Yellow Butterfly]

I know.......... thank you Fp.. :O)