Me.....

Me.....

A Poem by Yellow Butterfly
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Senryu

"




This is my reveal
All you can see are my eyes
Windows to my soul



© 2013 Yellow Butterfly


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Yellow Butterfly


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I love it.Nice senryu, The eyes do really tell more about a person if we really look at them

Posted 3 Years Ago


Yes the eyes are the window to the soul...and yours show a beautiful spirit. ;-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Hey you!... smart write.

*bird*

Posted 11 Years Ago


Yellow Butterfly

11 Years Ago

Hey up.... thanks Birdian... *smiles*
Nicely penned. We have the ability to let other people see just as much, or little, of us we care to reveal to them.

Posted 11 Years Ago


its beautiful cool and awesome....


Posted 11 Years Ago


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A very lovely soul indeed. It is always a pleasure to see who is on the other side of the poetry.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Hey, I see you ;) It's always nice when some reveals themselves, still you get me curious. Hahahaha

Posted 11 Years Ago


the eyes cannot lie Yellow......

Posted 11 Years Ago


It's definitely you alright - great lines - well put

Posted 11 Years Ago


Yellow Butterfly

11 Years Ago

Indeed it is Leighgreen... thank you :O)
In Belfast we can tell one's religion by the measurement of space between the eyes - you know that myth was believed by many to be true up until recently and could have gotten you hurt.
Couldn't hurt anyone with eyes like these or poetic talent like yours YB.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Yellow Butterfly

11 Years Ago

Wow... thanks for sharing.. and thank you Anto for taking time out to review much appreciated :O)
ANTO

11 Years Ago

MY pleasure
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