Me.....
A Poem by
Yellow Butterfly
Senryu
This is my reveal All you can see are my eyes Windows to my soul
© 2013 Yellow Butterfly
Author's Note
Reviews
I love it.Nice senryu, The eyes do really tell more about a person if we really look at them
Posted 3 Years Ago
Yes the eyes are the window to the soul...and yours show a beautiful spirit. ;-)
Posted 11 Years Ago
Yes the eyes are the window to the soul...and yours show a beautiful spirit. ;-)
Hey you!... smart write.
*bird*
Posted 11 Years Ago
Hey you!... smart write.
*bird*
11 Years Ago
Hey up.... thanks Birdian... *smiles*
Nicely penned. We have the ability to let other people see just as much, or little, of us we care to reveal to them.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Nicely penned. We have the ability to let other people see just as much, or little, of us we care to reveal to them.
its beautiful cool and awesome....
Posted 11 Years Ago
its beautiful cool and awesome....
A very lovely soul indeed. It is always a pleasure to see who is on the other side of the poetry.
Posted 11 Years Ago
A very lovely soul indeed. It is always a pleasure to see who is on the other side of the poetry.
Hey, I see you ;) It's always nice when some reveals themselves, still you get me curious. Hahahaha
Posted 11 Years Ago
Hey, I see you ;) It's always nice when some reveals themselves, still you get me curious. Hahahaha
the eyes cannot lie Yellow......
Posted 11 Years Ago
the eyes cannot lie Yellow......
It's definitely you alright - great lines - well put
Posted 11 Years Ago
It's definitely you alright - great lines - well put
11 Years Ago
Indeed it is Leighgreen... thank you :O)
In Belfast we can tell one's religion by the measurement of space between the eyes - you know that myth was believed by many to be true up until recently and could have gotten you hurt.
Couldn't hurt anyone with eyes like these or poetic talent like yours YB.
Posted 11 Years Ago
In Belfast we can tell one's religion by the measurement of space between the eyes - you know that myth was believed by many to be true up until recently and could have gotten you hurt.
Couldn't hurt anyone with eyes like these or poetic talent like yours YB.
11 Years Ago
Wow... thanks for sharing.. and thank you Anto for taking time out to review much appreciated :O)
11 Years Ago
MY pleasure
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Added on September 4, 2013
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