Yes..Yes..Yes!!!

Takes me to a place where I have never been

where the music bounces in 'the' place to be seen

Temperatures rising bodies writhing we don't care

Atmosphere electrifying sounds flying everywhere
 
Although it's just me and the DJ alone in his booth

No one else around as he plays out music to soothe

He mixes the beats dropping two at once as a decoy

A collaboration between us that he wants to enjoy

Sending my mind into a hypnotic state of euphoria

Bodies in sync like a script from the Karma Sutra

A fervour and a rip tiding of waves taking control

Slowly moving and swaying the music takes its toll

Beats pumping we can feel a surge of adrenalin rush

Unable to stop this feeling of ecstasy this is no crush

Bodies rub skin to skin you can see the look of lust

Cannot hold back any longer we're about to combust

He pulls it out and his face lights up with desire

All I could do was say 'wow'...step back and admire

Babe...... he says with a salacious grin upon his face

as he takes another good look around the place

Holding it as the music is pumping he waves it about

 "This is it..my new release ..THE Rmix "..he shouts!

Author's Note

Reviews

[Eric Pudalov]

Wow, very hot and sexy...and surprisingly funny too! I'll have to check out more of your work.

[Tom]

It's still as good second time round !!

[00000000000000000000000..]

AWESOME!!!!!!! The music set it off awesome too:)

[Dr. Wood ?]

I take it it wasn't Barry Manillow then?

[MoriartyMesa]

LOL, I loved this. Nice job.

[Yellow Butterfly]

Haha... thank you for stopping by :O)

[Muse]

And what was the name of that song? I must listen!

[Yellow Butterfly]

haha.. thanks muse for passing by.... can't beat a good dance track to get you in the mood..

[ron]

LMAO. That was so funny. I love this one and the twist at the end. :)

[David Wesley]

Your image just blew me away, lol.

I love your metaphor here... It's hard for me to tell where there is sex and music ^_^

"look of lust" - love that.

^_-

[Yellow Butterfly]

haha Glad you liked .... thank you always... :0)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

OH DAMN!!! another sizzling piece... I totally felt the heat and the moment of pure adrenaline when dancing in such an erotic way! This is written with an electricity only the great Lady Butterfly could exude!! Yummy!!!

You make me want to dance my arse off!! Woo hoo!!

(the end was hilarious!... you big tease!!) ;D

Fabulous write...brings me back to those sultry nights in the club... I love it!~xoxo~:)

[Yellow Butterfly]

Dance away Robbie.... music is so empowering don't you think... hahah

Glad you liked the twist at the end too.. hahaa :O)

[Tom]

A raucous rave with a great fun ending and the accompanying soundtrack was nearly as hot hot hot !

A salacious, sexy write, kudos to you once more !

[Yellow Butterfly]

Raucous Rave.. I like that Tom.... thanks for stopping by.. :O)