Butt...erfly Effect

Three Sexy Senryu's

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~ When you are ready~
~To succumb your all to me~
~ I will surrender~


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~Devour your Desires~
~ I am weak in your presence~
~You have this effect~

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~Ready to exchange~
~You are the cause and effect~
~Set my soul alight~


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Author's Note

Reviews

[ANTO]

The three is series like this is like a narrative - a timeline to a night (or day lol) of unbridled passion YB.
I particularly liked the first senryu where the joint surrender is the beginning of 'the dance'...

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thanks Anto... much appreciated :o)

[Poetic Justice]

succulently superb..the three combine to make a solid poem..

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you PJ...

[BL]

Triple Senryu nice thought and makes it more powerful too

[Yellow Butterfly]

Hi Bluely... long time no see..lol...thanks for stopping by :o)

[BL]

Hi YB, I know it has been a long time...

[Hotwater]

Really good work here.

*bird*

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thanks Birdian *smiles*

[Dr. Wood ?]

who could resist.........................................

[Yellow Butterfly]

Lol. Thanks Dr Wood.. :o)

[Traci]

What a lovely, sensual write. This is the first piece of yours I've read...truly impressive. Will definitely be back to read more of you.

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you Traci :o)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is mystical enticement!... I love the music, I love the sensual and alluring Senryus....
You have worked your magic once again, Lady Butterfly!
I'm entranced....the cause and effect of your writing is magnetic!~xoxo~

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you Robbie.... :o)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Three is a crowd... but yet with these writes... I believe you've captured the reader... you got your message across with these senryu.... If I had to take one line from each and make a one:

~ I will surrender~
~ I am weak in your presence~
~Set my soul alight~

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you Glen for your lovely review :o)

[ayosonolowo]

I most talk:::::- briliant written

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you ayosonolowo for stopping by...much appreciated.. :O)

[ayosonolowo]

You're welcome

[Frieda P]

Ooh La La! This one sensuously tickles! Awesomesauce! ;-)

[Yellow Butterfly]

Aww thank you FP.... your reviews always makes me smile :O)

[Frieda P]

We're even since this one made me smile too. :-)