Butt...erfly Effect

Three Sexy Senryu's

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~ When you are ready~
~To succumb your all to me~
~ I will surrender~


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~Devour your Desires~
~ I am weak in your presence~
~You have this effect~

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~Ready to exchange~
~You are the cause and effect~
~Set my soul alight~


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Author's Note

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Note: Title is clever.....

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! Title and the 3 Senry's are marvelous. Very classy romance.

[Eric Pudalov]

DAMN, Butterfly! These are hot as hell. I like how each one is like a brief chapter to a love story. Senryu seems like a perfect genre for love/sexy poems. And you have inspired me, once again!

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

And all three are really, really, really sexy ;)

[Tom]

It's still as hot second time round ! Perhaps even Hotter !!

[MsJewel]

I love the soft, sensual flow of your words...a dance upon the page..much like a butterfly. Absolutely stunning imagery and a delight to read. :) Julie

[David Wesley]

Very very to the point I think. Chose your words carefully. A great exercise of condensed imagery and metaphor. Gives the reader a broad perspective and interpretation. Cools.

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you kindly... :)

[DJ]

A beautifully written piece that I stumbled upon in my newsfeed, very sensual yet sweet, I like the line "you are the cause and effect". It is so true when you find that someone who sets your entire soul on fire just by being them.

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you for your kind words... :o)

[Tom]

Overall amazing! 'Cause and effect' is my favourite line as it is what propels everything in this universe, be it physical or spiritual so you've nailed it here with its inclusion !

Superbly dreamy !

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you Tom for taking time out to pass by and review.. much appreciated :o)

[Tom]

You're welcome...

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

So very sensual... the second was my favorite. I've experienced that first hand. Well done!

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thanks..... glad you liked.. :)