Free Falling for you......

I am your Aphrodite and you are my Adonis... :O)

Hit with such a force a feeling of love

and lust crashing causing an impact

as two hearts collided

Rupturing feelings so amazing so powerful

Is this what it feels like to fall in love?

Unable to rationalize your actions

involuntary impulses take over the body

sending out waves of passions

A rush so overpowering finding yourself

standing on the edge of insanity

Happens so fast in the blink of an eye

an emotional connection neither

can run from nor hide

Emotions real so raw causing unbearable

pain buried deep inside the depths of  our core

Powerless and unable to breathe

unforeseen circumstances we had to part

Then a chance encounter our paths crossed again

Stirring as though we've never been apart

Now I know the answer to my question

As soon as I realized this heart was 

free falling for you once more...

 

Author's Note

Happy Valentines....

Reviews

[Dream Weaver]

Powerful description on how hard love hits you...
Like a hammer to an anvil, sparks commence trailing
off to the side leaving you wondering, how far have
I fallen? great little piece here! Nicely done.

[Frieda P]

Yep, finding yourself on the edge of insanity, that's mostly what it's like....free falling is such an apt term for it, nice one!

[Sami Khalil]

as two hearts collided

Rupturing feelings so amazing so powerful
sending out waves of passions

A rush so overpowering finding yourself

standing on the edge of insanity...
That is the power of passion and the waves that overwhelms us even to the edge of insanity. In life paths will cross and intersect and we will feel the spark of love and answers to the natural and unnatural things all to comprehend the mystery of life.
Another of your great writes.
The feelings of free falling is powerful for we can't control things in our wake.

[Tree]

A wonderful poetic interpretation of the powers of attraction. That pull. Where everything else becomes a blurry fuzzy background except for the object of your desire. It is a force as powerful and real, as gravity. Thank you for sharing this

Diego

[Buddhistboy73]

another fine write...:) love the imagery again here...:) beautiful last two lines....(yours usually are:).....love and all its guises.....the power to send u temporarily insane...:) yeah I'd say this is love at its finest...:) BB

[Irfan Bashir Shah]

Well to say the least, yes this is how we fall in love.... Love is irrational and powerful... Love is beautiful.... Happy Valentines!
Nicely penned down.... :)

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you :O)

[The Nude Writer]

Wow.. you captured such a deeply amazing type of love with this one. :) Such power in your words, I love this :)

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you :O)

[zainul]

Happy Valentines...
It is an amazing piece.
Very well penned.
I love these lines as my most favorite:
"As I soon realised this heart was
falling for you all over again..."

[Yellow Butterfly]

Happy Velentines to you too...

Thank you for stopping by... :O)