Invisible....

Why do they say that sometimes true love is blind

Is it because love is invisible to the naked eye...

A  feeling so overwhelming when being in love

 makes hearts pound faster than you can ever run...

So why is it so hard to see, this love a blaze inside

every-time when your around it overpowers me...

The heat radiating igniting raging passions

releasing powerful electric currents...

Bodies moving in synchronicity

our body language doesn’t lie...

So, why don’t you see me the

  way that I see and feel you..

 My love is for sure real

could it be that your
love is blind?
~

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Lovely work , very artistic , genuine words.
Bodies moving in synchronicity

our body language doesn’t lie...

So, why don’t you see me the

way that I see and feel you..

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you :O)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome..:)

[Nobody Now]

Bravo. Love the Socrates kind of question here. Sort of think I can appreciate.

Personally, I do not think it is a matter of love being blind, I think it comes down to people being blind to what is around them, to busy and caught up in their own worlds.

This was a nice, short read with gusto. Good kick to the head and heart.

Again, I reiterate.
Bravo, magnifico, splendid.

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you for this great review....

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

I think you've aksed the real question of love. We humans always go with the more attracted people, no matter what. And still, do we believe in love at first sight? Do we know the book is good by its cover?

[Yellow Butterfly]

I appreciate your genrous words.....

[critic h]

the most beautiful way ever anyone has described love. It is the best love description i have ever read. You are very talented in twisting words to masterpiece.

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you so much....

[zainul]

You wrote a song with the lovely conversation.
The concluding line is the shortest yet proverbial.
This is a great piece for the genuine lovers.

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you for your thoughtful kind words....

[zainul]

You are most welcome.
Appreciate your creative work.

[Hotwater]

You've come on leaps and bounds with your poetry... Top draw writing here... Very well done!

*bird*

[Yellow Butterfly]

Hey, I've gained a 'TOP DRAW' beats winning any contest on here from my dear friend...

"Lots of smiles*

[Hotwater]

*Massive grin*

*bird*

[icelandicblue]

You have cleverly twisted the saying love is blind with mastery. The whole poem builds in almost a whisper until the final truth is revealed. You are very talented and insightful. I will be sure to read more of your work.

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you. :o)

[Revery]

Love the photo. Women have a far more complex and competent perception then men. We are fools in comparison. Nice write. I love your style and often relate to it.

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you.. And you my friend have a connection and a deeper understanding. Of women, this is evident in your masterful writes...

Thank you again.. :o)

[Jibey]

Intriguing.... and a clever twist at the end... the lover that does not seem to see love's reality... I felt for you...

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you Jibey, I'm pleased you were intrigued.... :o)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Sometimes love is blind...some must have a life changing moment to realize that it is right in front of their very eyes. This is a vibrant reflection of yearning for love to be noticed.

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you Robbie.... :O)