Invisible....

Why do they say that sometimes true love is blind

Is it because love is invisible to the naked eye...

A  feeling so overwhelming when being in love

 makes hearts pound faster than you can ever run...

So why is it so hard to see, this love a blaze inside

every-time when your around it overpowers me...

The heat radiating igniting raging passions

releasing powerful electric currents...

Bodies moving in synchronicity

our body language doesn’t lie...

So, why don’t you see me the

  way that I see and feel you..

 My love is for sure real

could it be that your
love is blind?
~

Reviews

[Buddhistboy73]

Indeed! An age old question - is love blind? Like the format of this piece and the idea of unrequited love. "The heat radiating igniting raging passions"......this is powerful stuff...enough to heat up any cold winter's night....;)
BB

[Distant horizons]

eally nicely done here, with a wonderful ending. I would say yestto the last part :-)

[N!LoC]

I think this person is blind to love... BecAuse if love is blind ... Then that person will love u no matter what .. (I think that's how the saying goes) ... Either that ... Or this person is scared or just oblivious of love

[Lily Mae]

Oh, I love this.. nice twist at the end.. and yes ... their love is always blind;) xo

[Yellow Butterfly]

Your an amazing poetess Lily any review from you is well reciprocated .... :o)

[David Scott]

Sometimes it is a blessing to be invisable... When we feel that what is there to be seen would no be what we would want others to see.
Love is not blind though. Love see the projection of the best you. The real you with all the crap that sdoes not matter filtered away.
I loved this poem.
I loved you vidoe clip on your profile! Best thing i have seen in a while.
Thank you for both gifts today.

[Yellow Butterfly]

You are most welcome David and thank you for your generous review

[Coyote Poetry]

I don't know. I believe when love got you. You are done. Love is blind to people who are afraid to open new doors. Thank you for the outstanding poetry. Open the door to many more questions.
Coyote

[Yellow Butterfly]

You always write wise words...

Thank you Coyote

[kelvin]

very good on describing the feelings associated with the emotion known to all as love and how some people act and react to this feeling. Nice embodiment of words puzzled together to make a nice piece here as always keep writing fellow writer.

[Yellow Butterfly]

Nice words from a talented poet... thank you

[kelvin]

You're welcome and thank you

[Relic]

It's funny how the body reacts to certain people. Flat with one person, then completely surging with another to the point of being weak in the kneed. To be able to feel that together is a wonderful thing. But when it's only you that feels it and the other doesn't, that can be real sad. Good poem.

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you Relics...

[Relic]

You're welcome

[Krithika Raghavan]

Such a lovely picture there, and such a lovely thought too~ "Could it be that your love is blind?".. A wondering way to end the poem. Beautifully symmetrical. well done~

[Yellow Butterfly]

Your words are so kind...

[Kruppz]

nice flow...true love is mutual though...

[Yellow Butterfly]

Nice to here from you Kruppz and thanks for the review...