Turn My Pages

Written for the first guy I ever loved, though he didn't love me bak...

 

Turn My Pages
Open me up, make me feel free
Open me up more, turn my pages and see
I’m everything you’ve dreamt of
And everything you need
I’m your every desire
And you make me everything I wish to be
You’re the love of my life
And I want to be yours
You’re everything I haven’t been searching for
And so much more
You’ve opened me up and have turned many of my pages
I’ve told you many things that are very sacred
You don’t show me your emotions much, but I always show you mine
Because at the end of the day, I still want you to be mine
No matter your imperfections, no matter your flaws
I want you to myself, all and all
No matter the distance my love for you is true,
So you know that I’ll always stay loyal and true
I’ll never leave you lonely and never leave your side
All I know is that I just want you to be mine Mine MINE
You’re the first and only guy who has opened me up and turned my pages this much
So that’s exactly why I’m wanting you this much
You’ve turned my pages more than you know
And I want you to turn my pages for a little while longer
Because you help me be ME
So Turn My Pages Please…

 

Reviews

[Skye Céibhfhionn]

Let's talk about Love! [smiles] This is a huge memory for me, and I think for most people, and you just brought it back. Not only with what you write about, but that loving feeling of how it was to write about it in the same structure. I like your creativity and choice of wording, "turning pages" is a fantastic image to the creation of ourselves. Seeing us as books where experiences write new pages, and if someone wants to know, they need to learn to read us better [smiles]

As a small suggestion to this beauty, would be to verse it up a little. Give it space, and breath. Like this:

Turn My Pages
Open me up, make me feel free
Open me up more, turn my pages and see
I'm everything you've dreamt of
And everything you need

I'm your every desire
And you make me everything I wish to be
You're the love of my life
And I want to be yours
You're everything I haven't been searching for
And so much more

You've opened me up and have turned many of my pages
I've told you many things that are very sacred
You don't show me your emotions much, but I always show you mine
Because at the end of the day, I still want you to be mine
No matter your imperfections, no matter your flaws
I want you to myself, all and all

No matter the distance my love for you is true,
So you know that I'll always stay loyal and true
I'll never leave you lonely and never leave your side
All I know is that I just want you to be mine Mine MINE

You're the first and only guy who has opened me up and turned my pages this much
So that's exactly why I'm wanting you this much
You've turned my pages more than you know
And I want you to turn my pages for a little while longer
Because you help me be ME
So Turn My Pages Please�

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If any questions, don't hesitate to ask. let your Creativity flow!

Skye