Extraordinary

Dedicated to a special lady and to all the women that make a Good impact on our lives

You're Extraordinary
Like a rose bud that blooms;
Suddenly over night
unseen under the moon
as we sleep till dawn's light.

You're extraordinary
Like the way a caterpillar
can change into a chrysalis
then emerge a little later,
as a butterfly flying in bliss.

You're extraordinary
like the sunset as seen on the sea shore;
with its golden crest slowly sinking,
golden brown like your eyes' allure
and like your smile breathtaking.

You're extraordinary
like the way God created the universe
within six days with all His mighty glory;
and he's given me such a blessing,
to know you... An extraordinary Lady

Reviews

[Li Li]

This was very heartfelt. Seems like we have a very lucky lady out there some where. You put words together in a definition that is so loving. You truly expose your heart and analyze the things that surround you to finalize her. Which, is very appropriate.

Your use of words is wonderful. Free forming, yet very thought out. Nothing that I could see that needed change.

Bless!
~Li Li

[SyberRose]

Beautifully written...I enjoyed very much...SyberRose

[~Poetik Bliss~]

Thank so much :)

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

This is so beautifully written,I thoroughly read it and truly enjoyed it.You're such a good writer,Keep writing!

[Holly Mason]

very well written
really enjoyed reading
thank you for sharing

[Steffi]

Such a beautiful write! The word and the flow were so magical.
Such an excellent read

[Lyra H]

Beautifully romantic, the visual image i get from this is purely brilliant in its ideals...great work...

[BriAnna Wyble]

u write beautifully


:]


i really enjoy reading your poems

[Sam Freeland]

To bless another gives poetic joy
to the extraordinary Lady and to others who read
We all need reminding and to certainly employ
our efforts to giving the same to our loved ones indeed
...well written and I enjoyed the repitition and rhyme