Mesmerized

Heart's Enchanted, Mind's Blinded......Anyone ever made you feel like this?

 

Heart's Enchanted,

Mind's Blinded

As I see you appear-

A blessing that God sent-

Time seems to stop

as you come near

your Smile wipes away any Fear..

 

Mesmerized, I'm Unaware,

who ever passes by;

seems to never be there

Your eyes is like a light

that pierces into one's soul,

and your smile melts this heart

that was once utterly cold

 

Mesmerized, For you I wish i could hold,

but that may be something

that only my dreams can mold

You see looking in your eyes

Is such amazing bliss,

Heart's Enchanted

Mind's Blinded

I wait for love's Precious kiss

Reviews

[Michael X]

Beautifully written, the sense of enchantment is accentuated by the choice of words,
as well as the way you wrote this using minimal wording, describing what it means
to be touched by an angel, as well as the concept of enchantment hypnotizing
the heart, the meaning reflected a magical experience in the making, Nicely done.



Mesmerized, I'm Unaware,

who ever passes by;

seems to never be there

Your eyes is like a light

that pierces into one's soul,

and your smile melts this heart

that was once utterly cold

[Pratibha]

mesmerised are those who read this wonderfully woven poem with carefully chosen words....words which r soothing to soul like rain over a desert....

[emmajoy]

Time seems to stop
as you come near
your Smile wipes away any Fear..

three beautiful lines that say it all...

Thank you for sharing your sincere and deeply felt words

[BriAnna Wyble]

this is my favorite poem of yours

[Illegitimate Artist]

I think you captured the emotion quite well. Anyone who has fallen in love can really relate to it. "Heart's Enchanted" really love that line!

I noticed thought in the second stanza forth line I think you meant "are" instead of "is".

Keep up the good work!

[Jessi]

WOW great write this is really awsome i love it